it's raining..
i hear the rain..
pitter, patter on the roof..
i like the rain..
i listen and listen on my window pane..
it takes away the pain..
it makes me calm..
slowly but surely it will..
i like the rain..
it is so mysterious to me..
i ever wonder..
why do rain falls..
i just want to know..
i like the rain..
it makes me think a lot..
a lot a lot a lot..
there is someone i wished to tell..
i MiSS you!!
i hear the rain..
pitter, patter on the roof..
i like the rain..
i listen and listen on my window pane..
it takes away the pain..
it makes me calm..
slowly but surely it will..
i like the rain..
it is so mysterious to me..
i ever wonder..
why do rain falls..
i just want to know..
i like the rain..
it makes me think a lot..
a lot a lot a lot..
there is someone i wished to tell..
i MiSS you!!
42 comments:
really don understand why ur english in SPM get same grade with me...i cant even write out anything like this....
i like the poem, :)
is me la...get cheated by me again...hahahaha
wa...secrectcy???
wad lai de???
haha...
herm...
jealous who???
no one le...hehe...
hey hey.. i miss u too wor.. jk..jk..haha...
nice rhythm u got there..
peter piper have a pipe..hehe..
lols.. u r hoping that someone out there will read this... especially her.. wakaka.. keep it up..
humty dumpty climb on a wall...
humty dumpty took a high fall..
and loose his balls!
wahhhahaha
the person who rotted..secrectcy
Liao wah....Ur english same standard with u then u can write poem?? I think u copy de lah....muaahahhahahahah....anyways...u should write the rain drop like someones plying piano......like this mah....hehehehehahhaahhahahaha
HO~!!!
dunno ho for what..
ngai ti since when ur english so deep..
haha..
anyway, nice de la..although me tak faham =p
hoi~
kayak boy
this have copyright de leh
=.="
that time sleepy liao, cant think more...
still have exam on the next day ma..
haha...nice one from the kayak boy..
"the rain drops like someone playing piano"
agree with tat...
haha...
it's raining now...
so after saw this: "the rain drops like someone playing piano"
feel tat...it's really like the some one playing piano...hehe...
Here too, it is raining,
Deep inside,
There's someone I've been missing,
But is it you? I can't decide.
Raindrops brought by the tide,
Travelled far and wide,
Came to me with your wishing,
Knowing that, it is a blessing.
Even if i might never know,
And it might never show,
I'll continue to miss
That someone i do not know.
(haha.. guess who?)
wahh..
steady nei~~~
really sak loo..
but i cant guess who wor..
>.<
Loves come with blessing,
Hopes come with wishing,
Cares come with smiling,
YOU come with missing.
The Rains fall down,
As someone playing piano,
My Heart fall down,
As someone rejected it.
The leaf falling from tree,
The raindrops falling from my eye.
*sambung kayak boy's poem..bcoz feel no ending..hehe*
Its time to forget
Its time to let it go
Its time to say goodbye
and
Its the end..
THx for the sambung..so below is the complete one...
Loves come with blessing,
Hopes come with wishing,
Cares come with smiling,
YOU come with missing.
The Rains fall down,
As someone playing piano,
My Heart fall down,
As someone rejected it.
The leaf falling from tree,
The raindrops falling from my eye.
Its time to forget,
Its time to let it go,
Its time to say goodbye,
and
Its the end..
wah...hock...very chem le your poem...i worship u!!!!
hiaks...
(can't guess = remain anonymous)
not bad ler, kayak boy n 嫣嫣..
here's my reply:
< The end? It will never be,
'cos I'm always here to continue.
This can last for eternity,
As it is all written for YOU...
I refuse to forget or let go.
To admit it's goodbye?
I'll definitely say no!
Even if it might make me cry...
For after the raincloud clears,
There'll certainly be sunshine,
That will take away all my fears,
Of knowing you'll never be mine...
And that gives me a reason,
Just to believe,
To keep on hoping with determination,
That one day, our love will live...>
* cool o not? but,
haha.. a bit swt liao..
~from missing to love??
reli dunno wat else 2 write ler..
>.< (the longest comment yet..)
omg..
these are freaking me out...
>.<
Holy~ here's the reply...
After the raincloud clears,
It also clears my heart to YOU,
Even it will be a sunshine,
But my heart still remain dark.
Knowing YOU will never return,
I slowly close my heart.
Knowing YOU will never mine,
Our love will perish in the rain.
The sky is still raining,
And my heart is still pushing,
Raindrops drop on the road,
My tears drop on my feet.
Kekeke...here u go Anonymous poet..
Hock, you macam kena pk XD..
here .. my words of gratitude.
The tears of sky,
fall on the earth,
never give it try,
never know what's love.
something is black
something is white
something is purple
something is blue
something is grey
something is green
something is red
something is yellow
something is orange
something is blank
love is..
something that is colourful
woohoo i win i win..haha
duh.. u guys din rhyme leh...
anyways, it's my turn!
huhuhu~
The rain has come and gone,
Without a sound the sun had shone,
It is now the moon’s turn to be alone,
In the sky, waiting for dawn…
As time goes ticking by,
I ‘m still here wondering,
Why on earth don’t you reply?
And ‘ah hock’, it’s YOU I’m asking.
Continue writing,
Another poem or something,
Don’t just say ‘it’s freaking you out’,
‘cos FUN is all this is about.
Also, I’m suggesting,
That all your poems should be rhyming,
For it’ll be more challenging,
And bring out more meaning.
This time, I’m not gonna write,
‘bout loving or missing someone.
As a matter of fact, rite,
It is too common for everyone.
Finally, to kayak boy,
Try to let in the joy,
And allow the teardrops to dry,
Because it’s not worth it to cry.
(i'm good leh? try to beat that.)
Whos poem tht u say no rhyme?? N yanyan ur poem swt swt....bo standard...
Loves is colourful,
Life is joyful,
But in the end,
I loss the colourful in my sight.
I don't even know,
The waiting is worth for,
I don't even know,
The crying is who for.
At all sudden,
Other she come to my heart,
I feel warm as the sunshine,
The rainbow fill into my sight.
Love story may as common as you say
But it fills with many miracles,
If there is the end,
then there will be I start again.
(swt liao, make so many poem dono for wht)
apalah...kayak boy like ur head so complicated baru write so many complicated de poem...like anonymous and mine baru sak ma...
lolzz saa
there's a little flame
spark between rain lovers
did you sense the miracle?
that slipped between us
there's a little word
that makes me feel sweet
for everything you said
thrusted into my heart
there's a little habit
missing you on rainy day
hide this feel in silent
for me, it's secrecy
^^
hock..ur one post have 27 comment..full of secrecy lerh
so lazy 2 write poem ler...
if this continues on ar..
can compile into book n sell lor..
haha~
p.s. tat poem not i write de..
(anonymous ≠ anonymous poet)
to anonymous: very meaningful.. like it.
Infinite in mystery,
Is a gift of the goddess,
We seek it thus,
And take to the sky,
Winds spoil on the water surface,
Thr wandering soul know no rest,
When the war of the beast,
brings about the world's end,
The goddess descend from the sky,
Wings of light
and dark spread afar,
She guides us to bliss,
Her gift everlasting.
LOVELESS...
Diao....my poem too chim till no reply meh????wahahahahahah
other ppl bz.. then u say ur poem chim..
swt.. =.=III
not everyone like u so eng..
haha.. jkjk..
..!..o.O ..!..
create more poem to fight back lah..
anonymous poet..
Hehehe...me really to eng lah...fast liao....create more poem liao..if not i really boring lah...hahahahahaha
Silence within secrecy,
All alone in the darkness,
I seek the light,
That gives hope and guidance,
And illuminates the path of destiny,
Leading to a future beyond all possibilities.
When this faithful search,
Finally comes to a reluctant end,
Then we start to realize our foolishness,
In looking for something,
That is of non-existence,
So now in return,
As we are reflecting on our mistake.
MEANINGLESS…
~nah.. here u go..
like 2 write poem so much..
zzz..
I love you
you love me
we're a happy family
with a great big hug and a kiss from me to you
wont you say you love me too!
I love you
you love me
we're best friends as friends should be
with a great big hug and a kiss from me to you
wont you say you love me too!
Barneyless...
swt ler...
write something wif more standard de lar...
tat song oso hav copyright de wor...
Loves come with blessing,
Hopes come with wishing,
Cares come with smiling,
YOU come with missing.
The Rains fall down,
As someone playing piano,
My Heart fall down,
As someone rejected it.
The leaf falling from tree,
The raindrops falling from my eye.
Its time to forget,
Its time to let it go,
Its time to say goodbye,
and
Its the end..
The end? It will never be,
'cos I'm always here to continue.
This can last for eternity,
As it is all written for YOU...
I refuse to forget or let go.
To admit it's goodbye?
I'll definitely say no!
Even if it might make me cry...
For after the raincloud clears,
There'll certainly be sunshine,
That will take away all my fears,
Of knowing you'll never be mine...
And that gives me a reason,
Just to believe,
To keep on hoping with determination,
That one day, our love will live...
[want to let it go..
it's not easy...
want it to go on
it's more difficult..
HOPING may not be the best..
the best is...
leave to GOD to decide
to decide our destiny]
and i guess i know who is tat anonymous poet...can i tell them miss anonymous poet?
LOL..
they knw liao lar..
no nd tell.. hehe
I gueess this is the 41 comment liao^^ AH hock sak ho...so many ppl PK u...wahaha....
If have a things to make me smile,
That will be my Mother give me money,
If have a things that make me cry,
That will be pocket money Zero.
Even 嫣嫣 already move house,
But my pocket still don have money,
Even ahhock already get older,
My pocket still lack of money.
Though i don know who is anonymous,
And my pocket still don have money,
Though i get grand prize 4D,
My pocket still lack of money.
^^ what a good poem...wakakakkaa
suddenly miss this post n its comments so i came n read it all over again XD
ps. it's raining here now~
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